Hellkite Charger deck

so here's what it looks like now, what do you guys think?

Spells
4x Lightning Bolt
1x Pyroclasm
1x Slagstorm
3x Comet Storm
4x Bear Umbra
4x Growth Spasm
4x Cultivate
2x Summoning Trap

Creatures
1x Thrun, the Last Troll
2x Avenger of Zendikar
3x Primeval Titan
4x Hellkite Charger

Planeswalker
2x Chandra Nalaar

Land
4x Rootbound Crag
4x Raging Ravine
2x Valakut, the Molten Pinnacle
6x Forest
9x Mountain

Side
4x Nature's Claim
3x Staggershock
2x Obstinate Baloth
2x Summoning Trap
1x Avenger of Zendikar
1x Asceticism
1x Kozilek, Butcher of Truth
1x Emrakul, the Aeons Torn

seems kinda like a weaker version of valakut. or least a much higher cruve on the mana base.

MD changes i'd make ( without testing )

-1 pyroclasm
-4 cultivate
-4 bear umbra's (cool combo, but easily disrupted)

+1 mountian
+4 explore
+4 overgrown battlement

those would allow you to accelerate at a much more consistent rate, and gives you a nice turn 2 blocker

SB i'd change the following:

-3 staggershocks +3 arc trails (boros, vampires fear this card way more then staggershock)
-1 ascetism
-1 koziliek bot +2 slagstorm

anyhow i think this would be better...if you had a 4th p. titan to the deck it would allow it to become more consistent with the valakut gameplan. might also want to find a home for green sun zenith...its beast with overgrown battlement - turn 2 wall - turn 3 gsz into wall - turn 4 avenger or charger

I think you need to keep four valakuts with your build and four titans. I like the burn. That might be able to hold off agro decks untill you get one massive damage combo going.

mk, well to take your advice jason i need 2 arc trails (cant find mine) and 2 slagestorms.