GB Pod Legit?

was talkin to people at the shop about GB pod for DKA and I found a really good list I thought was pretty good.

2 Acidic Slime
4 Birds of Paradise
1 Geralf's Messenger
2 Glissa, the Traitor
1 Grave Titan
2 Phyrexian Obliterator
1 Sheoldred, Whispering One
4 Strangleroot Geist
2 Thrun, the Last Troll
2 Vorapede
Creatures [21]
1 Asceticism
3 Beast Within
4 Birthing Pod
2 Black Sun's Zenith
2 Doom Blade
1 Genesis Wave
2 Green Sun's Zenith
Spells [15]
1 Dragonskull Summit
8 Forest
2 Kessig Wolf Run
3 Rootbound Crag
6 Swamp
4 Woodland Cemetery
Lands [24]
SIDEBOARD
3 Ancient Grudge
1 Asceticism
1 Batterskull
2 Go for the Throat
2 Hex Parasite
2 Ratchet Bomb
2 Sword of Feast and Famine
2 Sword of War and Peace

needs more creatures and less of :
1 Asceticism
and
3 Beast Within
or
2 Doom Blade
* also running black pod you should have the skinrender -> banshee -> rever demon ftw combo

only need one phrexian oblit, same with glissa.